Monday, September 30, 2013

Group 3 May and Agatha's conversation.


                             Lauren S, Nicole M, Gianna V, Liz VB                                            


After Ralph saved Agatha, he left his soon to be family shocked, sitting next to a cracked open vault. Not knowing where he was going, Annabel ran to the door and shouted “RALPH! Where are you going?!”  When Annabel turned around, in despair that Ralph just left without speaking, she started to cry. The whole room went silent. Agatha asked her grandfather where our soon to be uncle had gone. Agatha was the only one who didn’t see what happened because she was in the vault while Ralph was cracking the safe open. Mr. Adams was too shocked to even speak. After about an hour of waiting to see if Ralph would come back to the bank, they decided to go home. When May and Agatha got in the door of the house they were so tired that they ran straight to their room. Just before May was about to fall asleep, Agatha stopped her. She put her hand on her shoulder and asked, “Do you think Uncle Ralph will ever come back?” she asked confused.
“Well, Agatha,” May explained, “Uncle Ralph isn’t a good man he takes other people's money."
           “But he is a good man, he saved me so why would he do that?" Replied Agatha.
“I don’t know. All I know is that he’s gone.” May said.
“But why would he leave before his wedding?”said Agatha.
"Why would he leave our wonderful Aunt Anabel?" Added Agatha
“I really don’t know. No one knows where he went, Agatha.” May said.
“All I can tell you is that you're alive right now because of him."
“Okay,” said May. “Goodnight.”
“Goodnight” said Agatha.
and remembered everything from Agatha getting locked in the vault, to Ralph cracking open the safe and leaving them all in confusion. She then just closed her eyes and went back to sleep. Agatha soon woke up, got out of bed and walked down stairs only to see their Aunt Anabel and their Grandfather sitting eating breakfast in silence. Agatha sat down with them and couldn’t resist asking,
“Why did Uncle Ralph leave?” She said in a sad voice.
Agatha started to regret what she asked but she wan
The next morning they woke up to the bright sunlight coming through the window. May woke up ted an answer.
There was a long pause until Mr.Adams said, “I don’t know.”
Annabel started to tear up of the remainder of the previous night and walked upstairs.
“He could have been embarrassed. Or maybe he was sad, depressed, or even ashamed.” said Mr.Adams
Just as he said that they heard a loud knock on the door Agatha walked to the door.
When the door swung open she sees a tall, man in a black fancy tux and a dark gray tie with a smile on his face.
Agatha asked, “What are you doing here Uncle Ralph?”
”I’m ready to get married to the most beautiful woman in the world.” Her Uncle Ralph explained.
Agatha watched her aunt appeared at the top of the staircase with a shocked expression on her face. Anabel then hurried down the staircase into Ralph’s outstretched arms as he embraced her in a big hug. May then woke up and walked downstairs, surprised to see her uncle standing at the door with a bouquet of flowers in hand.  “Annabel Adams, will you marry me?” he begged, as he got down on one knee.
“Yes!” she cried, “Yes!”
The End

6 comments:

  1. it was good cause it showed lots of reactions.

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  2. I liked how it had tons of twist and turns

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  3. I like how May kept on having to tell Agatha the story so she would understand what happened. I also like how Agatha kept on asking "why" like a young child does in real life.

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  4. Some grammatical errors but I loved the ending.

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  5. I loved the ending and it was a really great story overall

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